Opinion: This essay was different. I was surprised by the reasons he gave about why people watch horror movies. I was also surprised about the comparisons he made. But I think it is true that people watch scary movies to say that they can sit through them. I liked the comparison he made to roller coasters because everyone can relate to roller coasters that have scared them. I think its true that he claims people watch horror movies because they want to become children again. It brings out the inner kid in them. The essay went off into tangents that I didn't even expect.
Wednesday, July 29, 2009
Week 6 Why We Crave Horror Movies
Opinion: This essay was different. I was surprised by the reasons he gave about why people watch horror movies. I was also surprised about the comparisons he made. But I think it is true that people watch scary movies to say that they can sit through them. I liked the comparison he made to roller coasters because everyone can relate to roller coasters that have scared them. I think its true that he claims people watch horror movies because they want to become children again. It brings out the inner kid in them. The essay went off into tangents that I didn't even expect.
Week 5 Debates and Torture
Another topic I liked was the one about high schools not offering kids good food to eat so children are getting fat. My high school tried to bring in healthy food and cut down on the sodas and change the chips to baked but it failed because they weren’t bringing in as much money with the healthy food. The school has to make money as well and if it means offering unhealthy food then that is what they are going to do. Once in high school kids have the capability of making their own decisions. They know if what they are eating is good for them or not. They are almost adults and must take responsibility for their actions.
Torture: The essay on torture was pretty interesting. Mirko Bagaric, argues that torture is necessary. He says that torture is necessary in order to save the life of any innocent human being. He compares torture to self-defense, claiming that if someone is held hostage, the police have the right to kill them right then and there in order to save the life of the person taken hostage. He also gives objections against the argument of torture such as if torture is used the situations will increase. His second objection is that torture will dehumanize society and finally that people can’t be certain that torturing a person will result in us saving a life. He claims that if people torture wrongdoers then they will take responsibility for their actions.
Week 4 Children Need to Play, Sticks and Stones, Working at McDonalds
Sticks and Stones and Sports Team Names: I didn’t really see the point in this essay. I have never actually thought about the name of a sports team. Richard Estrada believes that naming sports teams for ethnic groups is detrimental. His two reasons are it treats people like team mascots and it singles out a politically weak group. One argument he claims is that ethnic group leaders are too inclined to cry wolf in alleging racial insensitivity. I don’t think anyone really cares about the names of sports team. I think they are more interested in how they play and how well they are doing during their season.
Working at McDonald’s: When I started reading this story I thought Amitai Etzioni was going to talk about how bad McDonalds is for kids because they will get fat. I think it would have been more interesting to read about how healthy McDonalds is as opposed to reading about jobs teenagers have. I have never actually worked so I don’t have any personal experiences but I think it is good for people to work while in high school. Because not only are they making cash but it also looks good on college application. It looks good that the kid is able to do well in school while working.
Monday, July 13, 2009
Week 3 Perfect Crime, Church-State, No Child Left Behind
Church-State: This essay just bored me. It started of with past history about how the “religion of the state was the religion of its ruler.” Feldman tries to explain both sides of the problem. He also explains some common ground between the different arguments. He states, “despite the differences, each approach, values evangelicalism and legal secularism, is trying to come to terms with the same fundamental tension in American life.” This is important because not only does he provide examples to explain the different sides of the argument but also find areas where both sides agree on the issue.
No Child Left Behind: I like this essay only because the author uses Wikipedia. All through school, whenever we had to write essays using outside sources, teachers always told us never to use Wikipedia because it was not reliable. This author broke the rules and went ahead and used the dreaded Wikipedia. In this essay, she presents both sides of the argument behind the school systems. But they both agree that progress must be made to help improve the quality of the school’s test scores. In her conclusion she says that only “time will tell whether No Child Left Behind is viewed as an ‘historic initiative’… or as ‘just an empty promise.’”
In our opposing positions essay, we have to present two sides of the argument. We have to write an unbiased and opinionated paper about our topic. In our conclusion we are not allowed to take a side on the issue. We have to put all the facts on the paper for the reader to make their own decision. On our next paper we will be able to pick a side and argue why that is the better of the two sides.
Wednesday, July 8, 2009
Week 2 Cannibalism, Love, Born to be Happy
Love: I thought this story was really boring. Toufexis tried to portray love as a neuro-chemical process. She explained the many different chemicals involved. She goes on to explain the difference between the four year itch and the seven year itch. She also explains the three different stages of love: imprinting, attraction and attachment. She has many different sources throughout her paper such as Dracula, Marilyn Monroe and a professor at Loyola Marymount University in Los Angeles. She also tries to explain love as a biological process in which evolution plays a major role.
Born to be Happy: In this essay, Friedman does a good job of explaining his point. He does a good job of explaining all the terms. He mentions hyperthymia, a disease that makes someone be happy all the time. Even when bad things happen they have the strength to remain happy because they feel things could be worse. On the other hand, there are people who are always upset and in a bad mood, this is diagnosed as dysthymia. He goes on to explain that people have taken drugs to avoid any extreme moods.
In my concept essay, I will write about the different types of intelligences. I will discuss the three most common ones, bodily-kinesthetic, logical-mathematical, and verbal-linguistic. I will explain that intelligence is not determined by how well you do on tests because there are many different types of intelligences. I will also include examples of different well known people who have each of the different types of intelligences.
Sunday, June 28, 2009
Week 1 Calling Home, American Childhood, Being a Real Westerner
Calling Home: I really liked this story. It kept me interested throughout its entirety. It is a well told story because it has a good beginning and middle. The end is not so great because it does not explain the significance of the memory. It only ends off with the idea that she learned her lesson and her parents did not punish her for what she did. In the short story is there good usage of dialogue, it is not a lot but it is sufficient for the comprehension of the story. Brandt does a good job of using vivid presentation especially when she describes the Christmas shopping. She describes the people in the store looking for presents and them chattering and the laughter.
American Childhood: This story had a good beginning. It started off as a story about football and how she use to play with the other boys on her street. But as we read on, we found out it was about her and her football buddies throwing snowballs at passing cars and finally getting caught and being chased down by a man in the car. there is good description of the snow and how she felt while she was being chased. There is not much dialogue but it does not seem necessary to the story. The significance of the story is briefly mentioned.
On Being a Real Westerner: This story is not as clear as the other two. In the middle of the story Wolff explains his experience of being in Vietnam and then goes back to explaining his childhood story about handling a gun. It is not very cohesive throughout. But it does have vivid presentation and enough dialogue. The significance is also not stated very clearly. It just ends with the idea that he was trying to find his true identity. He talks about how he was nervous to go back to his apartment because he did not want to think about the squirrel he shot and killed.
In my own remembrance essay I tried to incorporate some of the things these writers used. I wanted to give a clear description of what I felt when I was leaving the country and coming to a brand new place. I wanted to express the emotions of not only myself but my friends and family. I also wanted to use enough dialogue which would help the reader understand what I felt. Lastly, I wanted to include the significance of my memory.
